Cinquain

Cinquain

Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed 
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines.  It was developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.
(For further information, please scroll down for an article on Cinquain from the SP Quill
Quarterly Magazine written by Deborah P Kolodji.)

Another form, sometimes used by school teachers to teach grammar, is as follows:

Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.

Example:

angels
kind beyond words
they protect and forgive
and make feelings of blissfulness
cherubim

Copyright © 2003 Erin Holbrook

Knowing What Counts: The Cinquain
By Deborah P Kolodji

On October 8, 1914, a thirty-six year old woman died of chronic pulmonary tuberculosis in
Rochester, New York. One year later, Manas Press published her first (and only) book of
poetry, Verse. This poet’s name was Adelaide Crapsey, the inventor of the American Cinquain.

Crapsey was born in 1878, the third child of an Episcopal clergyman. She graduated from
Vassar College, returning to her high school boarding school, Kemper Hall, to teach literature
and history. A few years later, while teaching a course entitled, “Poetics: A Critical Study of
Verse Forms” at Smith College, she began a study of metrics which led to her invention of the
cinquain as we know it.

In its simplest dictionary definition, a cinquain is a poem of five lines. Crapsey’s cinquain was
more specific, a poem of five lines with a specific syllable count of 2-4-6-8-2, usually iambic.
The ideal cinquain for Crapsey was one that worked up to a turn or climax, and then fell back.
Similar to the “twist” that often occurs in the final couplet of a sonnet, a cinquain’s “turn” usually
occurs during the final, shorter fifth line or immediately before it. Thus, the momentum of a cinquain
grows with each subsequent line as another two syllables, usually an ambic foot, is added bringing
the poem to a climax at the fourth line, falling back to a two syllable “punch line”.

Part of the imagist movement in the early twentieth century, Crapsey wrote her cinquains in
precise, natural language with minimal use of adjectives. Although influenced by her study of Asian
poetry forms and her translations of Japanese haiku, she titled her cinquains and was not opposed
to the use of literary devices such as alliteration and assonance.

At some point in the mid-twentieth century, elementary school teachers started using a modified
version of the cinquain as a grammar lesson. Instead of syllables, these poems emphasized
grammar forms as the criteria for each line. Although useful as a teaching tool, these “didactic”
cinquains were never widely published. Recently, there has been a renaissance of cinquain poetry
on the internet, of the syllable-patterned form that Crapsey developed. Modern cinquain writers
have been refining the form as they experiment, sometimes using resonance between the first
and last lines to bring the poem full circle. Many poets writing today’s cinquains draw from their
experiences with haiku, effectively using juxtaposition to divide the poem into two halves, which
compliment each other with layered meanings.

Cinquain poets have also been experimenting with cinquain variations – cinquain sequences
(polystanzaic poems made up of cinquain stanzas), crown cinquains (a five stanza cinquain
sequence), reverse cinquains (a cinquain with a reverse syllable pattern of 2-8-6-4-2), mirror
cinquains (a two stanza cinquain sequence of the pattern 2-4-6-8-2 2-8-6-4-2), and cinquain
butterflies (a “merged mirror cinquain” where the two stanzas of a mirror cinquain are merged
together, one of the middle 2 syllable lines is dropped, resulting in one nine line stanza of the
form 2-4-6-8-2-8-6-4-2). Please note that a cinquain butterfly is not a “cinquain” because it
doesn’t have five lines, but it is a “butterfly” made up of two cinquains that were merged together
into one poem.

Now it is the reader’s turn to experiment. After some practice, the rhythm of a cinquain will begin
to feel natural. It is important not to force a poem into the cinquain form but to allow the form and
the discipline of its syllable count to grow the poem. Since there are only twenty-two syllables to
work with, it’s good practice to avoid the use of unnecessary words and make each syllable count.
However, be forewarned – writing cinquains can be addicting!

Printed in the SP Quill Quarterly Magazine, Spring 2005, Volume 6. All Rights Reserved.
The following examples were also published with this article.

Example #1:
Turquoise Thoughts

Hammered
silver bracelet,
desert sky turquoise stone -
city-bound but feels sagebrush in
her soul.

Example #2:
Cherry Blossoms

Cherry
blossoms float on
the afternoon breezes.
Petals fluttering down like snow
in spring.

Example #3:
Joshua Tree

hair spiked,
a crooked stance
in the hot desert sun -
dust in his face, he limps towards
the blue

Example #4:
Long Shadows

Maples
in the morning
sunlight cast long shadows
upon the snow like a roadmap
of limbs.

Example #5:
Resurrection

Early
summer heat wave…
Spring dies a searing death
only to rise from the ashes
next year.